III-'D Rabyz' Concept Pitch

First assignment was the concept pitch. A storyboard were asked to create for short animation, and here is the synopsis of my pitch:

A bunny was in a classroom writing an open topic essay for his examination entitled "I want to be a superhero'. Upon writing his essay, he wondered what would happen if superheroes existed in the world. The next thing he knew, he fell asleep and dreamed into the very character he was writing in his essay. According to the sto0ry, this superhero had ridden the world of bad guys and evil and was hailed a hero to all. Being the hero that he was, he enjoyed the feeling of glory and being adored by all as the city's idol. Soon to be rudely swoken by his examiner Mr. Cow, he promptly realised that he hadn't begun to write his essay and he was on the lines of being out of time. Filled with anxiety Bunny tried to rethink of his dream that he had just experienced and attempted to transfer into his paper but after several moments, nothing could pop up into his mind! At the end of exam, Bunny's exam paper remained empty and got a solid egg for his test because of it. Bunny walked out the exam hall crying with pain and regret for there was nothing he could to do change the fact that he failed. Bunny then slowly walked out sobbing. changed his clothes and took off into the air to save the world. Whoever knew that Bunny is an actual superhero.

Here is my storyboard!Well, initially was hoping mine would get chosen since I have put lots of effort into it, but unfortunately it didn't been chosen!!SAD!!